http://www.statenews.com Matthew Macon, 28-year-old Lansing resident and suspected serial killer, was found guilty on five counts, including two counts of first-degree murder and one count of assault with intent to commit murder this afternoon at the Veterans Memorial Courthouse, 313 W. Kalamazoo St. in Lansing. en-us Foundry4 Thu, 24 Jul 2008 19:49:16 -0400 Sat, 10 May 2008 13:53:11 -0400 webmaster@statenews.com http://www.statenews.com/index.php/comment/16859/view Ma’am, you almost got your commas correct. “killer, was found guilty on five counts, including two counts of first-degree murder and one count of assault with intent to commit murder this afternoon at the Veterans Memorial Courthouse, 313 W. Kalamazoo St. in Lansing.” apparently he was going to commit murder this afternoon. Fri, 09 May 2008 00:07:55 -0400 http://www.statenews.com/index.php/comment/16859/view http://www.statenews.com/index.php/comment/16863/view Danny, I believe that she used her commas correctly. In your post, you omitted a comma after the second use of the word murder. It’s a complex sentence with two prepositions but it still checks out I believe. Sat, 10 May 2008 13:53:11 -0400 http://www.statenews.com/index.php/comment/16863/view